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devastator919 the flayer Bronze Member
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| Subject: M Chronicles Thu Nov 13, 2008 8:49 am | |
| Hey guys, this is just a little somthing that i did. it's about the mandalorians. Hope you enjoy! M Chronicles: Chapter001 2100 hours the jungles of zulu on planet etopia The night was unimaginably humid, I was just finishing patrolling our sector. I took of my helmet to wipe of the sweat. I hate this land, this desolate place, why the Lord Mandalore wanted this planet is beyond my thoughts. I heard a noise at my back, I look around and see an etiopian, “Die Mandalorian scum!” He jumped up high, these etiopians jump like overgrown frogs. With his scythe held high and him decending toward me, I readied my mace to bash his brains in. I was surprised when I saw his lower body land first and his upper half landed a while after, mangled by something sharp, claws maybe… Swid“ Jeez, devastator, don’t just stand and look at that scum, lets go!” Dev: “Damn it, Swid! it was supposed to be my kill!” Swid, just smiled and shrugged, “That’s the problem with you big guys, you’re to damn slow.” He looked towards the distance and pointed. “ Anyway, we got a shitload of bogeys at 12 o’ clock” I smiled and grabbed my mace, “Race to ten thousand, 50 credits to one who kills ten first.” Swid smiled back “You’re on” Mandalore was on his ship watching every sector in the Etiopian planet. Mandalore just shook his head, Mandalore: “They’re at it again, *sighs* those two will never give up.” He looked as devastator and swid battle for the third in command of the army, Foxy Lady, Mandalore’s second in command looked at the monitor observing the two wasting the rebels in their sector. Foxy: “You know those two act like children, well, except one is a blood thirsty monster, and the other one is a deadly speed demon. *laughs a little*” Madalore: : “True, atleast they’re getting along in conquering the planet.” As Mandalore looked at the other monitors, something caught his attention. A warrior, not etiopian, was wasting his warriors left and right. Mandlalore: “Well, well, looks intresting. Foxy! get to sector 6! incapacitate and contain!” Foxy saluted and went to her ship. As mandalore watched the warrior through the sector 6 montior, Mandalore: “Well, well…we meet again my old friend” | |
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| sweet u gotta actually continue this one. |
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| | | devastator919 the flayer Bronze Member
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| Subject: Re: M Chronicles Fri Nov 14, 2008 12:23 am | |
| M Chronicles Chapter 002
In the midst of the destruction only Swid James and Devastator remained standing. The two are spectrum contrasts of each other. Swid preferred to be neat and quick with his victims, cold and calculated was his style, while Dev always leaves his victims behind mangled leaving blood everywhere blood lust was his favorite aspect in warfare. Though these two maybe different in so many ways, both are efficient in their trade. As a testament to this, 20 thousand etopians lay dying, either opened up neatly by swids swords or mangled beyond recognition by dev’s mace.
Swid: *sighs* Damn it. *throws 50 credits towards dev* you lucky bastard, it was a freakin close game too!
Dev: *laughs* *catches 50 credits* yeah well, close or not, I still won my friend *bashes one of the dying etopians*
As both dev and swid walked a way from what will forever known as the etopian massacre, both receive a message from their supreme conqueror Mandlore Horridwing:
Envoys, Devastator919 and Swid James head to Sector 6, to reinforce Foxy Lady. Incapacitate and Contain. I repeat Incapacitate and Contain only.
Dev: “Looks like we’re in for something big Swid. Usually Foxy works alone.
Swid: “ I know, looks like this guy’s gonna be strong”
Dev: *grins toothily* “Lets see who’s stronger then, I’ll crush this bastard whoever it is.”
Swid: “Easy big boy, remember what horrid said, this one lives.”
Dev smiled and his one red eye glowed, “ You’ll be surprised what you can live through.” As he said it, it sent a chill down Swid’s spine, he didn’t show it though, “lets just go you sadistic bastard.” With that, they were off towards sector 6
Meanwhile on the Flag ship ss. Revan
Horrid watched as two of his best men traveled to sector 6 and simultaneously he watched his topic of interest cutting a bloody swath through his men.
Horrid: “Keep on going , my old friend, have your fill of blood, soon you’ll meet my trump cards and we shall see if you still have what it takes.”
Horrid smiled as he thought of the prospect of his protégés Foxy Lday, Swid James and Devastator919 battled against his old nemesis.
On Sector 6:
“Ha! you mandalorians were never a match for me, not in this lifetime or any lifetime!” The unknown warrior cut through a mandalorian trooper. His red armor mixed with the dark red blood of his mandalorian victims glistened in the afternoon sun. after the last of his victims fell to the ground he lifted up his head and shouted. “ I am the madnalorian bane, see the blood travels through my armor! Red! I AM KILLER RED! FEAR ME MANDALORIANS!” before he could finish his tirade he was blown away by foxy’s katana.
Foxy: “Shut the hell up bendejo”
Killer Red: “ You dare interrupt me?! you think you alone can challe- GRAHHH!!!”
A swift flash of silver cut through the back of Killer Red, he was thrown back again a couple of paces . It was swid with his swords out and wearing a smile on his face.
Swid: “Didn’t you hear what the lady said you twat? Shut the hell up!”
Killer Red: “Insolent fool! you dare-“
Again he was cut of as a giant shadow covered him, he looked behind as the titanic figure of devastator overshadowed his. Devastator picked red up and roared. Then dev slammed him to the ground and kicked him towards the middle of the trio.
Dev: “I WILL RIP YOUR THROAT OUT AND STRANGGLE YOU WITH IT!!!”
Dev charged Killer red and swung his mace, red managed to block it. but the force knocked him back towards Swid. Swid kicked Red at the back but red managed to avoid it again,
Killer Red: “Ha! you fools think you could just hu-“
Killer Red fell to the ground with a dart on his back, foxy lady walked up behind him. in her hand her customized blow dart.
Swid: “Is he…”
Foxy: “ No he’s not.”
Dev: “Unfortunately”
The trio surrounded Killer Red, Foxy opened her comlink and informed Horrid of their situation.
Foxy: “Yes sir, we have him. Right away sir. We have our orders, Dev, carry the prisoner to the ship.”
Dev: “Yes ma’am.”
Foxy: “And Horrid wants you two come as well, he has a ‘special mission’ for you.”
Swid and dev looked at each other and sighed, even they know that this ‘special mission’ is gonna be hard as hell, but what are they going to do? After all, they are Mandalorians. A mandalorian never backs down….. | |
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| Subject: Re: M Chronicles Fri Nov 14, 2008 1:55 am | |
| OH YEAH, WE NEVER BACK DOWN!!! | |
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| | | devastator919 the flayer Bronze Member
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| Subject: Re: M Chronicles Fri Nov 14, 2008 5:40 am | |
| This is just a description of the characters of my story: enjoy!
M Chronicles Cast:
Lord Mandalore Horridwing: A master of the dark arts, leader of the mandalorians, he rules with a more a subtle approach to his men, don’t be mistaken, The darth lord rules with an iron fist. Unlike his men, he does not reveal any emotion but revels in battle. His hunger for power is insatiable and the power that he has is already immeasurable. So far, none has been able to stop him and his army of Mandalorians.
The Four Deaths: The four protégés of Horridwing, consist of Foxy lady, Delacroix, SwidJames and Devastator. these four are the deadliest among Horrid’s army.
Foxy Lady: Who ever told us women are meant to be at home is greatly mistaken, The second in command of Horridwing, She is a femme fatale, she is the most trusted among the “deadly four.” her primary weapon is a dual katan which she uses with deadly proficiency. Anyone who fights her shall feel both the anger of the heavens and savagery hell combined. Beauty and savagery combined that is what best identifies this Femme fatale.
Delacroix: The most unique of the four deaths, unlike his comrades, he is more inclined to use the dark arts, he attacks his victims through mental and psychic means, even though he does not fight physically, he is still as dangerous as his other comrades. Anyone who finds him facing Delacroix, will surely be driven insane by this warriors dark magicks. He also serves as the tactician of Mandalore.
Devastator: If Delacroix is the embodiment of mental power, Devastator is the embodiment of physical strength. His favorite weapon is his huge mace, any normal person can’t lift it, but he wields it with surprising grace. Able to concoct massive amounts of destruction he thrives on his bloodlust, leaving his victims mangled beyond recognition. Anyone who braes to face Devastator shall be doomed to unending pain. He is also known as the monster of the Four Deaths.
Swid James: Known as the speed demon from hell, he uses his twin samurais cleave thorugh his enemies. He is best known for his quick and neat kills, rumors say that he could kill a man before his victim spills any blood to the ground. Anyone who meets him is dead before they even know it. He is also known to be cold and calculating and rivals Devastator for position in the Mandalorian Army.
The Dark Father: This shadowy figure is best known as the adviser of Mandalore, little is known about this man. However, he is feared and respected, even though he is not a Mandalorian himself. His origins are unknown but rumors say he comes from sector 666.
Killer red: A Rival of Mandalore. He swore to kill as much mandalorians as he can and one day, battle with Mandalore himself. He is quick and powerful. However, he still has to face the four deaths.
So far those are the characters who have and will appear in the story. I’ll update this when other characters come about. | |
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| Subject: Re: M Chronicles Fri Nov 14, 2008 5:59 am | |
| Wow astig ^^ Tol ok lang ba sayo sa may Circle kasi kita inintroduce sa comics, sa may City Hall | |
| | | devastator919 the flayer Bronze Member
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| Subject: Re: M Chronicles Fri Nov 14, 2008 7:10 am | |
| oo naman tsong! hahahaha!! | |
| | | devastator919 the flayer Bronze Member
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| Subject: Re: M Chronicles Fri Nov 14, 2008 9:06 am | |
| M Chronicles Chapter 003
On the SS. Revan
The darth lord sits on his throne, expectant on the prospect of his “guest boarding his flagship. At long last, he will destroy his nemesis. This is what he should have done way back when. Back when he was known as Powa, or jus Horridwing for that matter.
Horrid: “What do you think I should do?”
A voice from the shadows came, it was a whisper, but it resounded through out the room. It was his adviser known as The Darkfather, as powerful sith-like entity from unknown reigons.
Darkfather: “Be cautious, Killer Red may be faking it, he has always played underhanded.”
Horrid, saw the wisdom of his dark adviser. So far, all of the problems he has been unable to figure out, he figured out with the help of Darkfather. Although, Horrid does not rely on him that often, he is handy to have around. Darkfather appeared by the side of his throne. His hood and cloak seemed to meld with the shadows, everything about him seemed to be black, except his skin which was pure white, but what’s really to take notice about him is his eyes, they were yellow around the iris and had red pupils.
Darkfather: “They’re here…”
Horrid: “Then lets make Red welcome then.”
On the hallway inside the SS. Revan
Everyone moved out of the way when three “Four Deaths” walked in to the hallway. They were called the Four Deaths because every mission they were given, be it by team or individual they cause hundreds of thousands to die. They are the four highest ranking members to the Mandalorian Army. The head of this team, Foxy. Beauty and Savagery combined, she may not look like it, but she is the most powerful among the four borne a mandalorian through and through she is the first of the four who was taken by Horrid to be under his tutelage. Behind her are the Speed Demon and the Monster. Swid James is the recon specialist of the group silent, cold, and stealthy that was his signature. Before being a full fledged mandalorian he was a thief and an assassin for hire. Eventually he came to steal in the wrong place, it was in Horrid’s castle where he was caught, by the darth lord himself. Instead of wasting him, Horrid offered his hand and trained him to become what he is today. Beside him towering over everyone else is Devastator. The monster of the group, he as well was not an original mandalorian, he was a mercenary, and when there was a bounty on Horrids head, he decided to go after it, he crashed in front of the castle killing every mandalorian on his way. When he and Horrid fought he was defeated, costing his right eye. Instead of killing him, Horrid saw something in him and offered his tutelage and through the power of the sith, healed his right eye.
These four were the most dangerous of the mandalorian army. As they walked through the end of the hall, Foxy called out to the figure waiting at the end, the fourth of the Four Deaths, Delacroix. Like foxy, he was of mandalorian decent, but instead of traditional training, he underwent mental training, and eventually gained telepathy and psychic powers. He can reportedly kill an enemy through making him insane.
Foxy: “Delacroix! put our guest in stasis”
Del: “Yes ma’am.”
As Devastator dropped the unconscious killer Red his body floated and a red energy field enveloped him. The four walked towards the end where a huge door awaited them. The door opened and it revealed the throne room of the deadliest mandalorian of all. Horridwing.
The four kneeled in front of their leader and presented his unconscious nemesis. Horrid stood up and walked over. he waived the energy field and Killer red plopped to the ground.
Horrid: Foxy, wake him up.
Foxy took out the dart on Killer Red’s back. All of a sudden Killer red opened his eyes and started forward. He stopped when he saw the familiar figure in front of him.
Killer red: Horrid!!
Horrid: *smiles* “Nice to see you again old friend.”
Killer Red clenched his fist but did not do anything. to charge his nemesis in his domain is stupid. Beside these four guards were around him. He took a glimpse at them, they were not ordinary guards, he remembered the three, but the other one he saw just now. He faced horrid again.
Killer Red: “Looks like you’ve added a couple of men to you’re group I see.”
Horrid: “Well, I was always the popular one Red. *laughs* so, how do you want to end this?”
Killer Red: “Who said it would end here?”
Horrid wondered what it meant when he said that, then he saw a small blinking light on his risk. Killer red smiled when he saw that Horrid noticed the distress beacon blinking.
Com Link: “Lord Horrid! A fleet of ships are coming they’re way. they warped east from here, E.T.A. 5 mins. Do we engage?”
Horrid: “Yes, prepare the ships.”
Com Link: “As you wish.”
Horrid: “ Foxy, lead the flights and engage. Swid, get a transport ship and lead the infilitration team inside one of their ships and take Delacroix with you we may turn one of their ships around and confuse them. Devastator, go to the flagship, destroy the head monitor so that Swid and othersy can enter a ship without notice. once it is destroyed….Kill everyone in the flagship.
The Four “Deaths: Yes Sir!”
As the alarm sounded, Horrid stood there looking calmly at Killer Red. Foxy and the others scrambled to the flight bay of the ship.
Horrid: Another one of your underhanded tricks eh?
Killer red: You’re a fool to leave yourself alone
As he said that he brought out his blades and started toward Horrid. Horrid just smiled.
Horrid: Who says I’m alone?
A dark tentacle shot forward and enveloped Killer Red, he dropped his weapons and could not move. Amongst the shadows, Darkfather’s figure came up. Killer Red’s reaction was one of awe and surprise.
Horrid: “You see, I anticipated you’re every move, that’s why I am an emperor, and you….just lead a rag tag group….which will die right now..”
As Horrid sat and reveled in his victory, he saw through the throne room’s huge window mandalorian ships and carriers appeared out of nowhere.
Horrid: “ I see you’re face has changed, *laughs* when will you ever learn.. Now we shall see the mettle of you’re little army of fire.”
Killer red: “Yes..we shall see..” | |
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| Subject: Re: M Chronicles Fri Nov 14, 2008 11:19 am | |
| OMG, OMG THIS IS GETTING BETTER AND BETTER!!!! AND THKS DEV THE DESCRIPTION U GAVE OF ME I JUST LOVE IT! | |
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| Ooohhh wow Hanep pare parang sine! | |
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| Subject: Re: M Chronicles Sat Nov 15, 2008 1:01 pm | |
| Wow, Dev, you're doing better than me.
Keep up the good work. | |
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| | | devastator919 the flayer Bronze Member
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| Subject: Re: M Chronicles Fri Jan 02, 2009 12:32 am | |
| Chapter 4
What should have been a peaceful scenery in outer space has become a chaotic massacre as red and blue laser coming from both mandalorian ships and aof ships fire at each other, neither army giving quarter, neither one backing down to the other.
On the SS revan:
Mandalore watched intently at the events unfolding before his eyes. It has come to this. His rival for years Killer Red in his grasp, and yet, it does not feel as if he owns Red’s fate, at least not yet. Mandalore could see foxy lady’s ship laying waste to any Aof ship with in range. At least one of the four is proving her worth. What about the other 3?
Mandalore:” Darkfather, show me Swid…
Darkfather: Right away…
The image of swid inside an aof ship showed through the window where Mandalore watched the war. Swid had broken in to the ship and had lay waste to whatever was in his way. It was left to lunar and the tact team to navigate the ship around and confuse the rest of the enemy.
Mandalore: Good…..now all we have to wait for is dev’s signal…
Killer Red: *laughs softly* rest assured Mandalore…your monster will not succeed….
Mandalore: What are you babbling about?! Devastator will waste your flagship in minutes!!!
Killer Red: We’ll see……
On the Flagship AOF:
Dev: IS THAT THE BEST YOU”VE GOT AOF SCUM?!
Dev shouted with glee as he smashed aof personnel left and right through Killer Red’s flagship. Dev was the only one sent out to do this part of the mission set forth by Mandalore, but he knew that he can handle it. He kept his eye on the prize as he saw the doors to the main control room. only a few more enemies stood in his way. He raised his mace as the last defenders tried to wound Mandalore’s Iron Fist and with one swing one defender dropped on the floor with his face ripped out by the spikes of devs mace. Another swing crushed the spine of the last defender.
Dev: This is to easy *laughs* now, time to waste this retched ar- GRaaaahhh!!!!
Something stuck out of devastator919’s shoulder…..it seemed like a giant metallic feather. Dev turned around to see his assailant. What insect could’ve done this?? As he turned around the monster’s eyes widened in recognition at the figure standing infront of him….
????: Hello Love bug…..*smiles showing fangs*
TO be continued…. | |
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| Subject: Re: M Chronicles Fri Jan 02, 2009 12:35 am | |
| Wohoo! Yeah! The jolly green giant is back! | |
| | | devastator919 the flayer Bronze Member
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| Subject: Re: M Chronicles Sat Jan 03, 2009 6:26 am | |
| continuation....
Dev was just standing there both angry, and surprised...its been a long time since he's seen her before...familiar emotions came back, memories rushed through his mind. He shook of his head, the last thing he needs is to be distracted...Dev growled and said just one word....
Dev: Hawk....
Hawk just smiled and the familiar voice cackled as she walked towards dev.
Hawk: You still remembered me love bug?! I'm so touched....
Dev: Yeah I remember you, the way you almost killed me!!!
Dev roared and rushed towards hawk. His mace ready to send hawk to oblivion. Hawk charged as well, metallic wings opened. she twisted in the air and pulled out her katanas.
On the SS REVAN
Mandalore: DAMNIT!! what's taking dev so long?!
Mandalore paced around the throne room as he pondered on this predicament. Rarely, has dev been this delayed before. If there was anything he relied about dev is that he can get the job done, no matter what the cost. He looked at Killer Red, what did his old rival had up is sleve? What forced his monster to slow down.....
Mandalore: Darkfather! Show me devastator!!
Darkfather waved his hand in the shadows to reveal the image of Devastator battling a woman warrior with wings. The emperor could see the strain on Devastator's face as he battled with this feme fatale. Mandalore turned around his eyes glowing red and he looked at Killer Red who just gave him a toopthy grin.,
Mandalore: What did you do.......*growling*
Killer Red: It's simple o emperor. I knew you would leave your monster alone on a mission, relying on his strength to finish the job.....well, horrid, this time, you relied on him to much. What you see fighting devastator, is a monster of a whole other level, derranged beyond salvation......her name is hawk.....and by the way....she's devastator's x girlfriend.....
Mandalore: You son ov a bitch.....you may have played me underhanded.. but remember whonstill hold the cards!!!
Mandalore smashed his fist on Killer Red's face. Killer Red just laughed and laughed. A look of perplexity came over Mandalore's face. Then realization as he looked at the button Killer Red had in his right hand. As his nemesis pressed it, a charge of electricity surged through his suit and crept towards the dark tentacles enveloring him. Darkfather dropped on the floor as Killer Red stood up.
Killer Red: Everyone of your four deaths are fighting for their lives, I think that the emperor should share the same fate.....*pulls out his samurai sabre*
Mandalore:*smiles* is this your plan all along?! FOOL!!! I will destroy you...
Mandalore took out his sword. The two stood there in the throne room, emperor and rebel. The background the sounds of lasers firing mandalore on aof, aof and mandalore....Finally, at this moment, nothing mattered.....not his empire...not his men, not even his four deaths....the war will end with Red's death....in a matter of moments this will coem to an end..... | |
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