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2Galvatron
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Number of posts : 1007
Age : 27
Location : what'a'na'men'a'me'
Registration date : 2008-05-26
 |  Subject: story project  Tue Oct 13, 2009 7:02 pm | |
| Ok so soon ill be writing a story thats for school. And as i go along i would like your honest opinion on it. And tell me which parts i should work on little more. | |
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Izanami
Platinum Member
Number of posts : 3201
Registration date : 2008-08-11
| | Subject: Re: story project Tue Oct 13, 2009 7:34 pm | |
| Ok  | |
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quasimoto(calamity)
Member
Number of posts : 23
Age : 30
Location : cali
Registration date : 2009-02-03
| | Subject: Re: story project Wed Oct 14, 2009 11:50 pm | |
| HOLY F|UCKING SH|T I CANT WAIT. I SKIPPING SCHOOL UNTIL YOU MAKE IT...... | |
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Guest
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| | Subject: Re: story project Thu Oct 15, 2009 1:29 pm | |
| so inappropriate.. (did i spell it wrong?) |
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Izanami
Platinum Member
Number of posts : 3201
Registration date : 2008-08-11
| | Subject: Re: story project Thu Oct 15, 2009 1:38 pm | |
| -smiles- Nope you did it correctly. | |
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Guest
Guest
| | Subject: Re: story project Thu Oct 15, 2009 1:42 pm | |
| i hate it when you spell something right, and the red lines appears.
freaking **** line. |
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X
Gold Member
Number of posts : 1814
Registration date : 2009-01-19
| | Subject: Re: story project Thu Oct 15, 2009 2:29 pm | |
| inappropriate theres an R | |
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Izanami
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Number of posts : 3201
Registration date : 2008-08-11
| | Subject: Re: story project Thu Oct 15, 2009 2:38 pm | |
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X
Gold Member
Number of posts : 1814
Registration date : 2009-01-19
| | Subject: Re: story project Thu Oct 15, 2009 2:40 pm | |
| lol yeah i like to read so im a good speller...well sometimes anyway | |
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Guest
Guest
| | Subject: Re: story project Thu Oct 15, 2009 3:18 pm | |
| sis...when does nel become a four legged horsez?? |
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Izanami
Platinum Member
Number of posts : 3201
Registration date : 2008-08-11
| | Subject: Re: story project Thu Oct 15, 2009 3:55 pm | |
| When she battled Nnoitra. | |
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Guest
Guest
| | Subject: Re: story project Thu Oct 15, 2009 4:51 pm | |
| um...is that in the rescue of orihime?! |
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Izanagi-no-mikoto
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Number of posts : 400
Registration date : 2009-09-15
| | Subject: Re: story project Thu Oct 15, 2009 4:54 pm | |
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Izanami
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Number of posts : 3201
Registration date : 2008-08-11
| | Subject: Re: story project Thu Oct 15, 2009 8:30 pm | |
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Guest
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| | Subject: Re: story project Fri Oct 16, 2009 8:39 am | |
| omfg, i have to watch now. |
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