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PostSubject: Chapter 13 - Dev   Chapter 13 - Dev I_icon_minitimeThu Dec 25, 2008 11:08 am

We all made our way to Mandalore's ship, otherwise known as "The Lying Eagle". It was pretty big, but not too big to attract a lot of attention. It was a spacious ship, not nearly tall enough for Dev to stand in, but good enough for all of us to have our own space. I decided I'd get everyones opinion on the matter of what's going on at the moment. So I walked out of my "quarters" towards the storage unit where I could find Dev. He was leaning back in a chair. He was a monster!! Ginormous!! He was taller then me, even sitting down!! I felt like such a child near him. He took off his helmet to reveal a lightskinned face. Scar over his right cheek. And a lowered left eye. Fairly good looking, even with his imperfections. He sat there just looking at me, like he was waiting for me to say something. So....I did.

Nebulon: so....tell me your history Dev, how'd you get into the Mandalorians?

Dev: you wanna hear 'bout the ol Dev's past eh? (I nod). Okay...well. I was always a big guy, as is obvious, I always was a fighter, just...never had a way to use it for anything. Growing up with my mom and dad, there were kids down the block. They were bullies. They'd pick on anything that walked, be it human, alien, or animal. They always would come by peoples houses to pick on them. Nerve right? Being that I had my massive size, nobody ever really picked on me, but one day, they did decide to pick on my girlfriend. This is during my teenage years, my girlfriend was always...nice, sweet, beautiful....... Anyway, they found her walking down the street to my house for a visit, and decided to go too far. They kidnapped her. I called her cell looking for her, but she didn't pick up, they did. They'd say in a shrilly girly voice "helloooo?". This angered me to no end, so I decided, let's not attack them, but tell their parents, since nobody ever did. But their parents were bigger jerks than they were. They felt their kids were angels, and nobody could tell them otherwise. I realized why later on too. They were Echani. The stuckup brats. I hated them!! In a fit of rage....I wound up killing them in cold blood. I located the kids in about 6 days, and killed them as well with the same mace on my waist. But when I got to my girlfriend...she was already dead. The entire Echani race would pay for that!! So when the Mandalorians went to war with the Echani on Dxun, I knew where I belonged. My story is basically... revenge. That's everything you need to know about me."

I was in shock....intrigued, and I didn't have on my helmet, you'd see a small tear rolling down my cheek. Now if everyone had a story like this, I had to hear more. It was a long way to Mustafar from Mandalore. Next stop, bedding quarters 2, Poseidons story.
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 13 - Dev   Chapter 13 - Dev I_icon_minitimeThu Dec 25, 2008 11:20 am

oh this should be interesting
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 13 - Dev   Chapter 13 - Dev I_icon_minitimeThu Dec 25, 2008 11:29 am

I'm always interesting. Could u delete the copies of this below? Stupid phone is acting dumb again.
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 13 - Dev   Chapter 13 - Dev I_icon_minitimeThu Dec 25, 2008 11:43 am

Whoah...Heavy.
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 13 - Dev   Chapter 13 - Dev I_icon_minitimeThu Dec 25, 2008 8:29 pm

*tear rolling down my cheek* just...beautiful...
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 13 - Dev   Chapter 13 - Dev I_icon_minitimeFri Dec 26, 2008 12:08 pm

-CLAPS- IM SPEACHLESS......
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 13 - Dev   Chapter 13 - Dev I_icon_minitimeWed Dec 31, 2008 2:14 pm

devastator919 the flayer wrote:
*tear rolling down my cheek* just...beautiful...

And where are you?
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 13 - Dev   Chapter 13 - Dev I_icon_minitimeWed Dec 31, 2008 11:41 pm

m kinda busy with the baby... my bad.lol dev is kinda a dad now so yeah...
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 13 - Dev   Chapter 13 - Dev I_icon_minitimeThu Jan 01, 2009 3:24 am

Whoa! You have a kid?!
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 13 - Dev   Chapter 13 - Dev I_icon_minitimeThu Jan 01, 2009 10:17 am

devastator919 the flayer wrote:
m kinda busy with the baby... my bad.lol dev is kinda a dad now so yeah...

Congratulations Dev!!^^
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 13 - Dev   Chapter 13 - Dev I_icon_minitimeThu Jan 01, 2009 11:21 am

holy kwap!! Shocked congrats!!
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 13 - Dev   Chapter 13 - Dev I_icon_minitimeThu Jan 01, 2009 7:08 pm

where is part 1? i like this better than my brother's story.
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 13 - Dev   Chapter 13 - Dev I_icon_minitimeThu Jan 01, 2009 7:16 pm

You're overstaying your welcome...
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 13 - Dev   Chapter 13 - Dev I_icon_minitimeThu Jan 01, 2009 7:17 pm

oh am i now?
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 13 - Dev   Chapter 13 - Dev I_icon_minitimeThu Jan 01, 2009 7:18 pm

The heck...? Why do you have my I.p?
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 13 - Dev   Chapter 13 - Dev I_icon_minitimeThu Jan 01, 2009 7:20 pm

i do? i dunno
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 13 - Dev   Chapter 13 - Dev I_icon_minitimeThu Jan 01, 2009 8:11 pm

yeah she's just barely a month old and so yeah, lol kinda weird....he weighed in a 8.5 lbs....lol so yeah, kinda takin care of little marcus xavier.. (thats his name lol ) and losing sleep at the same time. lol dont worry i'll be back writing stories and stuff.....
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 13 - Dev   Chapter 13 - Dev I_icon_minitimeThu Jan 01, 2009 8:17 pm

and we'll be waiting. Very Happy

Unfortunately Phantasm, chapter 1 of the story was deleted....unfortunately again...i lost it because i never saved it.
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 13 - Dev   Chapter 13 - Dev I_icon_minitimeThu Jan 01, 2009 8:27 pm

devastator919 the flayer wrote:
yeah she's just barely a month old and so yeah, lol kinda weird....he weighed in a 8.5 lbs....lol so yeah, kinda takin care of little marcus xavier.. (thats his name lol ) and losing sleep at the same time. lol dont worry i'll be back writing stories and stuff.....

Hoho, you sound so happy.^^
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 13 - Dev   Chapter 13 - Dev I_icon_minitimeFri Jan 02, 2009 12:44 am

yup i am, karla's living with me and i'm kinda working thats why i havent had time to be here and get things done dont worry though, i'll be onm in the weekends and stuff so yeah...see ya guiys!!
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 13 - Dev   Chapter 13 - Dev I_icon_minitimeFri Jan 02, 2009 12:45 am

-salutes- See ya Dev.
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