| Transformers: The war without end: Chapter 1: The attack | |
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Optimus Prime Bronze Member
Number of posts : 256 Age : 31 Location : Planet Cybertron Registration date : 2008-05-27
| Subject: Transformers: The war without end: Chapter 1: The attack Sun Nov 23, 2008 6:15 am | |
| Once, in a far away universe there is a planet called Cybertron. For a time, all the Cybertronian robots were in peace before the forces of evil called the Decepticons, led by Megatron have risen to install their domination of darkness and terror. All that stands between them and their victory are the heroic Autobots, led by Optimus Prime who have swore to protect all the sentient beings from the Decepticons' empire of evil. The battle has been waged for thousands of years, many lives were lost. All the Cybertronian robots fought to make their cause come true, until Cybertron fall in ruins. The Cybertronian transformers have scattered accross the galaxy, Autobots protecting, Decepticons destroying. The Decepticons' and the Autobots' ways have gone to a planet called Earth, where the battle wages on again... On Earth, some meteorites fall everywhere and then the meteorites disappear shortly after they got to the ground. The humans think that there are just meteorites but they should think again... All the meteorites are actually authonomus robotical organisms from planet Cybertron, who are ready to protect or destroy. Near by the last crash of some meteorites, some people come and see the meteorites were gone. The meteorites were the Autobots known as Bumblebee and Cliffjumper which scan two cars and go in the city, disguised. In the sky, a Cybertronian jet launches lasers and rockets upon the city, which almost falls in ruins. It is Megatron, the evil emperor of the Decepticons. His plan is to transform the planet Earth into slag and defeat the Autobots, once and for all. On the road, a red and blue truck and a orange truck with yellow flames hide in a forest that was near the road. The trucks transform, and they prove to be Optimus Prime, leader of the Autobots and Rodimus Prime, the Autobot second in command. Megatron sees them and he transforms into robot mode and so the battle begins: Megatron: Mwuahaha! Prime, you and your little Autobots came to protect the humans? Optimus Prime: Laugh as much you want, Megatron, but this war shall have an end, today! Megatron: Yes Prime...With your death! Megatron's hands turn into cannons and he hits Optimus, destroying a part of his armor. Megatron: You still are weak, Prime... Join me and we will rule the universe! Optimus Prime: Never! Optimus Prime turns his hand into swords and he slices Megatron's arms. Megatron: Even if I am incomplete, I still can obliterate you, Prime! Megatron transforms into a gun without some parts, and he hits Optimus Prime with all his power. Megatron: Die, Prime! Optimus Prime falls on the ground and Rodimus hits Megatron and Megatron transforms into robot and kicks Rodimus. Optimus rises and uses his swords to hit Megatron. More Autobots arrive and Megatron is surrounded. Optimus Prime: Surrender, Megatron. You have no chance against our forces. Megatron: Never! Megatron transforms to a Cybertronian jet and sends a message to his Decepticons: All Decepticons mobilize, we will attack the Autobot base and we shall take the control of it and destroy the Autobots! To be continued... | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Transformers: The war without end: Chapter 1: The attack Sun Nov 23, 2008 9:06 am | |
| A little better...but still not very good. The fight scene lacked a lot of detail which made it boring. Also, from the way its written, I feel like I'm listening to a 5 year old trying to tell me about aliens. Maybe stories just isn't your thing dude. |
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Izanami Platinum Member
Number of posts : 3201 Registration date : 2008-08-11
| Subject: Re: Transformers: The war without end: Chapter 1: The attack Sun Nov 23, 2008 3:24 pm | |
| THATS WHY I DONT WRITE STORIES.......IM BETTER DRAWING | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Transformers: The war without end: Chapter 1: The attack Sun Nov 23, 2008 3:53 pm | |
| seriosly foxy.. your better doing neither.. lmao joke.. XD and prime, 4 words.. your story is shit |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Transformers: The war without end: Chapter 1: The attack Sun Nov 23, 2008 8:57 pm | |
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Izanami Platinum Member
Number of posts : 3201 Registration date : 2008-08-11
| Subject: Re: Transformers: The war without end: Chapter 1: The attack Mon Nov 24, 2008 12:10 pm | |
| - ALMIGHTY LORD MEGATRON wrote:
- seriosly foxy.. your better doing neither.. lmao joke.. XD
-RAISES EYEBROW AND GRABS MEGA FROM THE NECK- VERY FUNNY MEGS..... :x | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Transformers: The war without end: Chapter 1: The attack Mon Nov 24, 2008 12:17 pm | |
| -throws a blade at your throat, as you fall dead- O_O then i turn round with a semi auto in each hand, then spot lights comes onto me as blue smoke rises all around me, then i walk slowly way wearing long black coat. like my little scene? LMAO |
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Izanami Platinum Member
Number of posts : 3201 Registration date : 2008-08-11
| Subject: Re: Transformers: The war without end: Chapter 1: The attack Mon Nov 24, 2008 12:18 pm | |
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Optimus Prime Bronze Member
Number of posts : 256 Age : 31 Location : Planet Cybertron Registration date : 2008-05-27
| Subject: Re: Transformers: The war without end: Chapter 1: The attack Mon Nov 24, 2008 1:32 pm | |
| Ok, you convinced me to stop posting my stories here, nobody likes them. So I'll just post images. | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Transformers: The war without end: Chapter 1: The attack Mon Nov 24, 2008 2:34 pm | |
| nobody likes ur images either O_O |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Transformers: The war without end: Chapter 1: The attack Mon Nov 24, 2008 9:47 pm | |
| My reaction...: - Optimus Prime wrote:
- Ok, you convinced me to stop posting my stories here, nobody likes them.
YIPPEEE!!!! - Optimus Prime wrote:
- So I'll just post images.
GODDAMNIT!! :x :x :x :x :x :x :x |
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Izanami Platinum Member
Number of posts : 3201 Registration date : 2008-08-11
| Subject: Re: Transformers: The war without end: Chapter 1: The attack Mon Nov 24, 2008 9:58 pm | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Transformers: The war without end: Chapter 1: The attack Tue Nov 25, 2008 11:16 am | |
| prime i dont mean to offend you but do you have any friends on tfx?? O_o |
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Optimus Prime Bronze Member
Number of posts : 256 Age : 31 Location : Planet Cybertron Registration date : 2008-05-27
| Subject: Re: Transformers: The war without end: Chapter 1: The attack Tue Nov 25, 2008 12:35 pm | |
| The ones that are in the Peace Bringer group, Darkfather, Madcrush, Defender the Ancient, Shinedevil and lil iron mike. They are my friends on TFX. | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Transformers: The war without end: Chapter 1: The attack Tue Nov 25, 2008 12:42 pm | |
| shine dont come here, and he left game a few months ago, and according to him.. (i dont lke to stir) but he dislikes you.. LMAO.. i talk to him on msn alot. |
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Optimus Prime Bronze Member
Number of posts : 256 Age : 31 Location : Planet Cybertron Registration date : 2008-05-27
| Subject: Re: Transformers: The war without end: Chapter 1: The attack Tue Nov 25, 2008 1:19 pm | |
| - ALMIGHTY LORD MEGATRON wrote:
- shine dont come here, and he left game a few months ago, and according to him.. (i dont lke to stir) but he dislikes you.. LMAO.. i talk to him on msn alot.
I still have many friends. | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Transformers: The war without end: Chapter 1: The attack Tue Nov 25, 2008 1:21 pm | |
| lol, keep dreaming.. xD half them ppl there dont even like you, you aint a leader, you a follower. you follow groups of ppl hoping they wll like you.. lmao |
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Optimus Prime Bronze Member
Number of posts : 256 Age : 31 Location : Planet Cybertron Registration date : 2008-05-27
| Subject: Re: Transformers: The war without end: Chapter 1: The attack Tue Nov 25, 2008 1:26 pm | |
| I am a leader. I don't follow anyone. I don't even care if someone likes me or not, I just fight for my cause: bringing peace and stopping the Cybertronian great war. | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Transformers: The war without end: Chapter 1: The attack Tue Nov 25, 2008 2:06 pm | |
| the great war is over. lol grow up kid |
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Ultra Silver Member
Number of posts : 658 Age : 33 Location : Los Angeles, California Registration date : 2008-07-07
| Subject: Re: Transformers: The war without end: Chapter 1: The attack Tue Nov 25, 2008 5:48 pm | |
| the great war is like....what 2...no.....4....6 years ago? jk but seriously that was way back last year when the game was still populated | |
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