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PostSubject: The War of Self Righteousness Part 2- The Peace   The War of Self Righteousness Part 2- The Peace I_icon_minitimeFri Jan 09, 2009 9:01 pm

Narem Rozyr. How I loved her. In our underground base I would always watch her sleep in her bunk. There were only a few humans left, and the question was raised if our species would ever survive the Great War. Yet throughout all the harsh conflict her beauty remained. Sure she had bruises, scratches, cuts and blood but that didn't stop my love for her. I never could sleep, I'll probably never know why. Most likely because above our heads the Itinu were beheading our own people. Yet I would still stare at Narem. Sometimes I think she knew I was watching her. I couldn't help it. Her black hair and blue eyes were divine. The only spark of hope left on this wretched planet. Then that tragic day. Our commander ordered Narem and I to rescue three of our people from the Itinu. We traveled the war-victimed land. We drank the few bottles of water we had. And then one day I couldn't help it. I knew one of us was going to die. It happened so quickly, we kissed passionately with our eyes closed. The next morning I woke up next to her. Little did I realize this was going to be the last time I would see her peacefully. After four days we found an Itinu camp and the three soldiers. An Itinu warrior was interrogating them. How I despised the Itinu. I can't describe how they looked, beacuse I honestly don't know how to. There is nothing to compare them to. Either way after I waited for the Itinu warrior to pass ... Narem and I freed our soldiers and quickly ran. However one of the Itinu chased after us and captured Narem. I saw as that Itinu brought out a knife and decapitated her right in front of me. The remaining four of us escaped to our base. I don't like to talk about Narem much anymore. The time I saw her death was very disturbing. Ever since that day I never slept. Never. The next morning I saw Optimus Prime destroy that Itinu camp. It turns out it had maps to all the Itinu camps on Earth. This was our first step to bringing down one enemy in the war. With the Autobots on our side we knew our future wasn't going to be TOO dark, yet somehow I doubted that.


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I noticed a lot of spelling mistakes in this one, but I fixed that.
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