Number of posts : 1007 Age : 27 Location : what'a'na'men'a'me' Registration date : 2008-05-26
Subject: Exes battle shorts Vader vs Ex Sat Nov 22, 2008 6:36 pm
Vader and ex were in a saber lock Ex force pushed Vader straight back but he didn't go flying into a wall like ex had hoped Vader deactivated his lightsaber and force choked ex. Ex was gasping for breath then started drawing on the force and let out large force burst Ex summoned his ligtsaber and ignited it same did Vader they hit lightsabers again and again Ex was pushed back alittle then force gripped a box threw it at Vader. Vader sliced it in half but ex cought him by surprise sliced off his mechanical exhaust fluids were spraying out -------training program ended
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Subject: Re: Exes battle shorts Vader vs Ex Sat Nov 22, 2008 7:14 pm
Wow...at least it was better than Prime's.
Izanami Platinum Member
Number of posts : 3201 Registration date : 2008-08-11
Subject: Re: Exes battle shorts Vader vs Ex Sat Nov 22, 2008 9:54 pm
LOL, SO TRUE.........
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Subject: Re: Exes battle shorts Vader vs Ex Sun Nov 23, 2008 5:58 am
have u ever heard of punctuation ex??
Its something you use when you write stories.. Well something you should use all the time, but more so stories.
I dont recall seeing one full stop in there, although i could be mistaken.
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Subject: Re: Exes battle shorts Vader vs Ex Sun Nov 23, 2008 6:01 am
Wait, nevermind i stand mistaken. There is 2 full stops in there. But i can see where there shoud be more, or a comma.
Neways this aint a school.. (lol) so all in all, not a bad, ummm, whatever it is. (If its a story, its kinda short)
2Galvatron Gold Member
Number of posts : 1007 Age : 27 Location : what'a'na'men'a'me' Registration date : 2008-05-26
Subject: Re: Exes battle shorts Vader vs Ex Mon Nov 24, 2008 12:19 am
yeah i now that im really just to lazy
Izanami Platinum Member
Number of posts : 3201 Registration date : 2008-08-11
Subject: Re: Exes battle shorts Vader vs Ex Mon Nov 24, 2008 12:08 pm