Transformers - Rise of peace - Chapter one: The menace

The Transformers. Planet Cybertron. Ruins. War. These are the words that can describe what is here... a terrible war that wages everyday... a war between the ones that want peace, the Autobots, and those that desire the ruling of the universe, the Decepticons. The war has been waged for thousands of years, and lives keep to be losing. Sometimes, some of the giant robots pass to the other side. That is one of the things that makes two things come true: friendship of those that have a new member, and hate of the ones that have been left. The giant techno sphere of Cybertron has no sun, that's why it's very dark and only authonomus robots can live on it. Everywhere where you look you see ruins and dead bodies of the ones that fall in battles. It's terrible to see. The Autobots have swore to protect their planet and the universe, but the Decepticons always try to bring their evil in the universe, and install the evil domination. All was usual until one day, when a dark and giant creature, more powerful than Megatron and Unicron at one place arrived on Planet Cybertron. He goes to the Decepticon base, where the evil Decepticons gathered to make plans to install their domination upon the galaxy. Megatron is hit by a sword in his spark, which easily sliced him in a half and he falls. The dark creature turning from Cybertronian Jet to robot sits on Megatron's throne and the Decepticons look at him scared and very amazed. They ask who they will hail from now on. And the dark killer of Megatron rises and says: "I am Wingtron! The ruler of the universe!" and then all the Decepticons shout: "All hail Wingtron!". Then Wingtron transforms his hand into a indestructible weapon and he shoots the Decepticons right in their sparks. Most of them die. The rest, go out of the base running away like a cat scared by a big dog. All the alive Decepticons run away to the Autobot base, where the Autobots prepare for attack. Right when the Autobots were going to shoot, Starscream, their new leader said: "We come in peace! Help us! Please! I beg of you, Optimus Prime!" when he heard Starscream's desperately request for help, Optimus tells to his soldiers to hold their fire and tells to Starscream to tell what happened. Starscream tells him about Wingtron, about how he wants to conquer the universe. He said that he and the rest of the Decepticons are ready to unite with the Autobots. But right when the alliance was being made, Wingtron arrives...

OK, SOUNDS PROMISING, KEEP IT UP

first of, your use of words is wrong. the past tense of hit is not hitted, its hit. powerfuller is NOT A WORD!!!!! dude, you're from america. you're writing in your native tounge, in your own dialect, and yet a kindergardener here can out write you. jeez! even your grammar is all wrong! dude, seriously, i'm not trying to diss you or anything but i cant believe that someone can mis-spell or misuse their own langguage. its downright embarrasing and castrating......

OH BOY, UR A HARD CRITIC DEV.......

n6 he's h6nest....

srry b64t the 6's....6=0.....<-----

LMAO!!!

lawl

Look, I was hurrying when I made it because I was on a fight in Game... but I'll edit it.

Better now?

YEAH, THANK YOU VERY MUCH^^

NO!!

...wtf....smh

LOOKS LIKE SOME ONE IS MAD!!........

im mad at this HORRIBLE story!!!

OK, OK, CHILL..........
TOO BAD I CANT SHARE MY HAPPINESS^^

its not a matter of being happy.....it's just....this story is HORRIBLE!!!!

I should slap Prime for making such a terrible story!!!

LOL, POOR PRIME...........LOL

i should slap whoever said it was excellent too.....smh

LOL Horrid maybe you don't like it cos deceps run to autos...but don't worry chapter 2 shall be much different... and I'll give you a clue... Starscream is a traitor... The chapter two will have brave decepts.

devastator919 the flayer wrote:

first of, your use of words is wrong. the past tense of hit is not hitted, its hit. powerfuller is NOT A WORD!!!!! dude, you're from america. you're writing in your native tounge, in your own dialect, and yet a kindergardener here can out write you. jeez! even your grammar is all wrong! dude, seriously, i'm not trying to diss you or anything but i cant believe that someone can mis-spell or misuse their own langguage. its downright embarrasing and castrating......

i know english is not your main language either but good try!

lmao!! n no prime....im just disgusted by how terrible the story is....

i beg you:

PLZ DONT MAKE A PART 2!!!!

OMG HORRID, U R SO CRUEL, LMAO!!!

Optimus Prime wrote:

The giant techno sphere of Cybertron has no sun, that's why it's very dark and only authonomus robots can live on it.

How can Cybertron lack a sun? Does it just randomly float there in space? Is that even possible?

G.O.R.T wrote:

Optimus Prime wrote:

The giant techno sphere of Cybertron has no sun, that's why it's very dark and only authonomus robots can live on it.

How can Cybertron lack a sun? Does it just randomly float there in space? Is that even possible?

No, it isn't possible.

O_O starscream would never ask prime for help
and dont say armada series
cuz to tell u the truth
starscream didnt want to be but BUT it was prime who told him to jion.


>.> thats how big of a nerd i am for tf.
ive seen it like 45 trillions times.