Commander Hawk
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 |  Subject: my second attempt.  Mon Apr 12, 2010 5:37 pm | |
|  well, this one i almost pulled my hair out. i tried my best to make it look realistic. ^^ comments please. | |
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| | Subject: Re: my second attempt. Mon Apr 12, 2010 5:38 pm | |
| Damn, this is an improvement. |
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Commander Hawk
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| | Subject: Re: my second attempt. Mon Apr 12, 2010 5:40 pm | |
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| | Subject: Re: my second attempt. Mon Apr 12, 2010 6:52 pm | |
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Commander Hawk
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| | Subject: Re: my second attempt. Mon Apr 12, 2010 7:12 pm | |
| >>>squeals<<<<  | |
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Steelclaw
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| | Subject: Re: my second attempt. Mon Apr 12, 2010 9:37 pm | |
| Very nice.
I would suggest changing the font's darkness on the second line and perhaps even placing that last line under the picture itself. | |
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Dr. Lecter
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| | Subject: Re: my second attempt. Tue Apr 13, 2010 11:18 am | |
| This is all good  This is a major improvement... blurs, flares... you should post the stock photo (original) so that we can provide more detailed critique. Golden rule in putting texts in pictures: Make sure they're readable. Make their colors stand out from the background (white font/black BG or some other contrast - check the lettering on Claw's and Kra's sigs, for example). | |
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