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PostSubject: my second attempt.   Mon Apr 12, 2010 5:37 pm




well, this one i almost pulled my hair out.
i tried my best to make it look realistic.
^^ comments please.
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PostSubject: Re: my second attempt.   Mon Apr 12, 2010 5:38 pm

Damn, this is an improvement.
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PostSubject: Re: my second attempt.   Mon Apr 12, 2010 5:40 pm

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PostSubject: Re: my second attempt.   Mon Apr 12, 2010 6:52 pm

Good job Hawky.
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PostSubject: Re: my second attempt.   Mon Apr 12, 2010 7:12 pm

>>>squeals<<<<


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PostSubject: Re: my second attempt.   Mon Apr 12, 2010 9:37 pm

Very nice.

I would suggest changing the font's darkness on the second line and perhaps even placing that last line under the picture itself.

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PostSubject: Re: my second attempt.   Tue Apr 13, 2010 11:18 am

This is all good

This is a major improvement... blurs, flares... you should post the stock photo (original) so that we can provide more detailed critique.


Golden rule in putting texts in pictures: Make sure they're readable. Make their colors stand out from the background (white font/black BG or some other contrast - check the lettering on Claw's and Kra's sigs, for example).
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