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PostSubject: Broken Wings   Tue Feb 23, 2010 4:27 pm

Rain Poured down the old Village, lighting dancing around the sky, the villagers running from place to place, seeking shelter. (the camera runs around the village, watching the sky, and thus turning around to see two small bandages flowing in the air) A female stood in a large rock, her eyes bandaged, her hair down, and blowing in the wind, she was wearing bloody bandages on her chest, and stomach, and a pair of knight leggings. she had black boots, with a black cloak around her, which was also blowing in the wind. The rain poured down her face and body..leaving small drops..her breath was quiet and soft. (the camera runs around the village, and the rest of the land, showing a fire Kingdom, a water Kingdom, and a sky kingdom, each with their kings, then the camera speeds through the forest and shows a beach, another village, and flies towards the female)

The sun shines through the rain clouds, as villagers smile and applaud to the beautiful rays, the female looking up...her lips into a sad smile..she stretches, and jumps down the rocks, her hair and bandages flowing behind the wind. she runs faster through the fields, as the sun shines brightly, she jumps on a rock and smiles, as a wave of fresh air hits her face...

(the camera runs after her, and speeds past her, to show you the ocean...with two broken wings made out of white energy)


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Name: Bloody
age: Unknown
sex: female
weapons: unknown
past: unknown
type: demon
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PostSubject: Re: Broken Wings   Tue Feb 23, 2010 6:41 pm

No hint of a premise.

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PostSubject: Re: Broken Wings   Wed Feb 24, 2010 4:32 pm

I will give it a try.
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PostSubject: Re: Broken Wings   Wed Feb 24, 2010 8:31 pm



Episode 1

A loud explosion sounded from the skies, as the village of the sky kingdom, was being attacked.
The villagers of the ground all screamed, and ran as the castle peices fell to the earth, a blur fell from the skies, fire was on the sky kingdom, as guards when to take the fire head on, the king roared in his throne, and summoned his best to grab the thief. the blur vanished, and landed on the ground, her heart racing, she heard all that was going on. she heard dragon wings in the air, and ran towards the west. she pushed villagers out of her way, and jumped down the walls of the kingdom. dragons roared after her, their rider taking out thier blades, ready to attack. the female landed near a white horse, she grabbed its reins and hit him, as she ran off the sky kingdom, with a small purse on her back, she still heard the dragons behind her, she gripped the reins harder, and sped faster.

The horse jumped from logs, and landed near some water pools. flaps of the dragons where near her, she gripped the horses reins and screamed, as the horse jumped from the water pools, and ran towards the fire lands. one of the guards, attacked with a sky arrow, as it flewed down to her, it knocked her from the horse, and unto the ground. the horse screamed and bocked, she panted as she ran towards the fire land, the guard was about to grab her bandages, when a fire stone slammed unto the dragon knocking him back.
the girl falls on the fire land grass, panting, sweat dripping down, as she turns her head back, hearing the curses of the guards, she got up, and ran towards the fire land, the guards growling knowing they cannot follow.


Bishop: 5:43:00
The land of the demons, has taken over earth, and has taken the planet naming it Broken Bishop.
The race of humans have been exterminated, thus only 3 still remain, though in the dark lords hold. The planet is held together by 4 orbs. the sky kingdom, holds the sky orb, which controls the weather and wind of the planet. The fire kingdom holds the fire orb, thus which makes the volcanos, the steam, the makings of the lands. the water kingdom holds the water orb, making the ice, the land, the pure. The earth kingdom holds the earth orb, which makes the land, and all of its habitants. when all four orbs are put together they create the gates of hell, that leads all the demons back into satans home.


Bishop 8:43:00
The land has its own demons roaming around, the skies are no longer blue, they have become red and fire, each kingdom has its own defences. its be law that no kingdom can go into the other kingdom land, without proper authoritiy. If one is so touch the other land, the punishment, is death. Sky and Water and Fire has technology from the humans, and have exterminated humans with future technolgy.



The female ran towards some moutains, and stopped, panting heavily, as she gripped her prize, laughning to herself, as her hands held the orb of the sky.
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PostSubject: Re: Broken Wings   Thu Feb 25, 2010 3:41 pm

The female ran inside the Fire kingdom, the guards watching, and looking back shaking their heads.
She heard some gasps, and jumped over some villagers pushing baskets of fruits. she landed on the ground, and ran towards the large red doors, she stopped abruptly when someone spoke her name.


*Bloody*


she panted, and hid her orb, as she turned around towards the sound, and knew who it was.
her father. second commander Wulfgang Kross.
*dont run*
the female bowed and smiled sheepishly, as she turned and sighed, walking towards her room, her body shaking, as she turned a corner, and ran towards her room.

The king was pushed by her, and only ignored her actions because he knew she was blind.
he walked towards the open gates, and smiled, and looked at the village in the fire, as they were happily producing wonderful foods, and goods.

The second commander, Wulfgang looked at the sky kingdom direction, and saw smoke coming out of it, then looked at the direction his daughter went.

What did she do?
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PostSubject: Re: Broken Wings   Fri Feb 26, 2010 5:48 am

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PostSubject: Re: Broken Wings   Fri Feb 26, 2010 3:49 pm



The city below glows softly under the sun's rays, giving it a glaze of gold, almost as if sheltering it in a dome of light. Its enourmous buildings nearly touching the sky, like the tower of Babel in the human Bible. The towers were lined with brilliant strokes of gold and silver, while the language of the humans that resided here marked the buildings. The sun itself reflected the markings off of the black structures. Such a beautiful sight to behold. The architecture and markings, along with the clever design of having the sun reflect off of them, made our buildings pale in comparison. The beauty of humanity's art and grace were evident. Humans of every race walked together, sometimes a few couples were seen, holding hands or expressing their love some other way. Children ran about playing with one another, without a care in the world. No forces of security could be seen, no military presence, and no corrupt individuals poisons the minds of the innocent. True peace. At least, that is what is what was displayed in my right eye.

As I closed my right eye and opened my left I saw the ruins of a once great city. A city once known as Ius Iuris, its great towers were now lying about the roads and streets of the city. Flora surrounded deserted buildings and crept in every corner where no sign of life but the flora resided. The humans were gone. No couples filling the air with romance, no children to watch as they slowly grow both in mind and body. There was nothing. The sun no longer shown above it, instead, clouds hung above it; constantly raining the tears of humanity's innocence, trying effortlessly to clear its sins away from the cursed city. In fact, no light ever made it to the city. Were it not for my eyes, Ius Iuris would be impossible to see. Being nothing but a pitch black plain. I closed both eyes shut, cutting off the scene below the tree that I rest on.
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The next day

I rose to my feet as the branch of the tree I stood upon stretched towards the balcony of my room. While I do enjoy the decor and majesty of my quarters, I prefered the outside with one of my trees, the only evidence of plant-life on the planet.

As I walked to the door leading to the hall, I noticed my daughter sleeping upon my bed. Her eyes were bandaged and her dirty brown hair was all over her face and matress. I dared to place my hand upon her head, but stopped half-way and turned my back, whispering to myself.

Find...find yourself.

Looking over my shoulder, she still laid on my bed, snoring on occasion. I fixed my cap to cover my eyes and proceeded to leave the room to the hall. The branch of the tree then retreated from the balcony.

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